MindMistress Webcomic Weview

[MindlessGenius]

Alright I'm finnaly getting around to giving you my review. I still havn't finished the archive which I really wanted to do but I said I would give you a review and its been way too long since I said that.

The Pros:
The writting for the most part of this comic is fantastic. While reading it I get very engaged in what is going on.

The whole plot itself. The whole idea of a mentaly challenged alter ego (if you can call her that since she's completly diffrent as Mind Mistress) was very clever. It reminds me of an action version of FLowers For Algernon.

For these reasons I do plan to get through the archive and have added a link to you on my website.

The Cons:
The art work itself shows a lot of potential but is falling short. You need sharper straighter lines and it would look a lot better.

The coloring as well is a problem. It just nees a more clean look, it is one of the main reasons why I avoided your comic for so long.

Her Costume...I'm sorry but to me all the lines on it are alittle too much. Though that is just a personal opinion...don't take it too harshly please.

Overall I think you have a great comic and I hope you keep at it. Hopefully I'll finish up the archives in the near future...I just didn't want to keep holding out on this review.
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[MindlessGenius]

Almost forgot something I was going to say. In the archives for the first issue there are too many options to neavigate through. Its much easier to just keep the basic naviagtion buttons.
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[alschroeder]

Thanks for the review, Mindless Genuis---I really appreciate it. I'll see what I can do about improving the art/coloring and perhaps the navigation on the first issue, although I do like the link to original pages, perhaps I can lay out the navigation differently. And MM needn't be wedded to that particular costume/armor (although compared to say, Spider-Man, the lines are a lot less) and for that matter, the armor might be improved---thank of how many revisions of Iron Man's armor there have been!
Thanks again!---Al
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[sun tzu]

Personnally, I like the lines. Also, they give a better sense of the third dimension.

[alschroeder]

Thanks, Sun! But for the rest of you....did you know BUZZCOMIX is back? I may move some of these reviews to the Webcomics Weview thread, if that's okay. Any objections?---Al
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Al Schroeder.
comic: http://mindmistress.keenspace.com
The greatest super power of all.
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[alschroeder]

More Mindmistress reviews (and some good advice) can be found here at http://www.buzzcomix.net/community/viewtopic.php?t=6239.---Al
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Al Schroeder.
comic: http://mindmistress.keenspace.com
The greatest super power of all.
Also check out Flickerflame :
http://www.webcomicsnation.com/alschroeder/flickerflame/series.php