March 17/05 - Selfish

BizRodian · Joined: 03 Mar 2005 Posts: 105 Location: Ottawa

Selfish

I wanted the Frog to make a big profound speech, trying to justify his actions, it was to be very deep and memorable, and in the end, he's realize how wrong he was, and it would be good.

Sadly, I then realize I am not Alan Moore, and can't write that well.

This is the result. I do, however, like the final line.

kundor · Joined: 03 Mar 2005 Posts: 27

I really like this one!

The implied shift between this episode and the next is full of unspoken hilarity.

BizRodian · Joined: 03 Mar 2005 Posts: 105 Location: Ottawa

Artistic creative desicion? Inability to come up with a segue? YOU DECIDE!

levelhead · Joined: 10 Sep 2004 Posts: 425 Location: neptune.

Indecision = creativity.

Hell yes.

...or is kundor right? WHO KNOWS? We'll never tell!
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kundor · Joined: 03 Mar 2005 Posts: 27

I really like the unspoken nature of the segue. It's like T-Rex's favorite cinema move, the circle wipe where someone is like "There is NO WAY I will do that" and then next shot BAM it's 8 hours later and they're doing it!

BizRodian · Joined: 03 Mar 2005 Posts: 105 Location: Ottawa

I kind of wish it was MORE unspoken, but I fear that'd be too subtle.